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# 文字作文·第1段

> 文字作文第一段：文字改写与表明态度的写法、句型与真题示例。

## 文字作文第一段：文字改写与表明态度

大多数同学对图画作文、图表作文非常熟悉，却没有见过文字作文，文字作文进入大纲后还未考过，因此我们只能看大纲样题。

52. Directions: Read the following excerpt from an article and write an essay. In your essay, you should explain whether or to what extent you agree with the author. Support your argument with reasons and relevant examples.

Write your answer in 160– 200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)阅读下面的节选并写一篇文章。在你的文章中，你应该说明自己是否或在多大程度上同意作者的观点。用理由和相关的例子来支持你的论点。

从题干我们可以得知文字作文的要求有两点：1.表明态度；2.论证观点。

这两点并不足以支撑起整篇文章，因此文字作文的三段话我们这样安排：第一段文字改写+表明态度；第二段原因分析；第三段总结全文+具体措施+畅想未来。可以看出，文字作文与图画图表作文只是第一段不同，二三两段相同。此时，请再次回味前文所说的：图画作文是透过图画看寓意、图表作文是透过图表看现象、文字作文是阅读文字提主题，他们的本质都是议论文。

Many of us, whatever our field of work, fear that showing uncertainty can damage our image and we may compensate by expressing overconfidence in an attempt to win trust. But in many situations people are willing to trust those who can admit they don't have a definitive answer. Recent studies found that communicating uncertainty and even admitting our mistakes is not harmful and can even be beneficial to trustworthiness. So, failure in "expertise" can be compensated by higher integrity and benevolence. When communicating uncertainty in a transparent way, we are perceived as less biased and willing to tell the truth.

我们中的许多人，无论身处什么工作领域，都害怕表现出会损害我们形象的不确定性——我们可能会通过表现出过度自信去弥补，尝试赢得信任。但在许多情况下，人们愿意信任那些承认自己没有明确答案的人。最近研究发现，交流不确定性甚至承认错误是没有危害的，甚至能助于提升可信度。所以，在“专业” 上的失败可以用高度的诚信和仁慈来补偿。当以一种透明的方式交流不确定性时，我们会被认为不那么有偏见并且愿意说出真相。

### 第一句：文字改写

从大纲样题我们可以看出，这段话可以分为两个部分：描述现象+表达观点。两个部分的分界线是研究表明（Recent studies found that），之前是作者描述的现象，之后是研究表明的观点，也就是作者的观点。因此，我们的文字改动变被动、被动变主动、高度概括、变换修饰语位置等。写也要分为两部分：改写现象+改写观点。改写思路有同义词/词组替换、主改写现象：Nowadays, gaining trust from others is vital in the workplace. Many people are afraid of damaging their image by appearing unsure.

如今，在职场中获得他人的信任是至关重要的。许多人害怕表现得不自信会损害自己的形象。

tell the truth when we show uncertainty in a transparent way.改写观点：The author believes that we are perceived as less biased and willing to 作者认为，当我们以一种透明的方式表达不确定性时，我们会被认为不那么有偏见，愿意说出真相。

不会改写怎么办？引出主题+改写观点

建议大家首选改写，如果实在是改写不出来，可以选择如下句子。

引出主题：

**待选 1**：It cannot be denied that 主题词 plays a key role in people’s work and life.

不可否认的是，主题词在人们工作和生活中扮演了重要角色。

**待选 2**：It is widely accepted that 主题词, a strong and positive life attitude, is the key element for individuals to achieve success.

人们普遍认为主题词，坚强和积极的生活态度，是个人取得成功的关键因素。

**待选 3**：Nowadays, it is well-known that the problem/ phenomenon of 主题词 has caused wide concern.

如今，众所周知的是主题词的问题/现象已经引起了广泛关注。

**待选 4**：With the rapid advancement of society and technology,主题词 has become a common phenomenon/ problem in our daily lives.

**待选 5**：Currently, whether to 选择 1 or 选择 2 has become a hot topic among 随着社会和技术进步，主题词已经成为我们日常生活中一个普遍的现象/问题。

people, especially among the young, and heated discussions are on the way.

目前，选择 1 还是选择 2 已经成为人们的热门话题，尤其是在年轻人中，激烈的讨论即将到来。

改写观点：

**待选 1**：The author believes that+文字中作者的观点

**待选 2**：Therefore, the author holds that+文字中作者的观点

**待选 3**：According to the author, +文字中作者的观点

**待选 4**：In the opinion of the author, +文字中作者的观点

**注**：题干中要求“说明自己是否或在多大程度上同意作者的观点”，所以必须表明作者的观点。作者观点虽然有两三句，但它们是“同义句”，大家选择容易改写的句子改写即可。

### 第二句：表明态度

这句话特别简单，就是“说明自己是否或在多大程度上同意作者的观点”。无非是以下三种情况：

强烈同意：I fully agree with the author's viewpoint.

强烈反对：I strongly disagree with the author's opinion.

部分同意：I share the author's view to a large extent, but I also believe that...

**注**：这句话虽然短，但必须有，因为题干有明确要求。

至此，文字作文第一段讲解完毕，以样题为例，使用不会改写的写法，完整的第一段为：It cannot be denied that integrity and benevolence play a key role in people’s work and life. The author believes that we are perceived as less biased and willing to tell the truth when we show uncertainty in a transparent way. I fully agree with the author's viewpoint.

不可否认，诚信和仁慈在人们的工作和生活中起着关键作用。作者认为，当我们以透明的方式展示不确定性时，我们会被认为偏见更少，更愿意说实话。我完全同意作者的观点。

以另外一道大纲样题为例：

Studies in the U.S. and the U.K. consistently show that children have lost the right to wander. This is why many of our youth turn to technology. They aren't addicted to the computer; they're addicted to interaction, and being around their friends. Children, and especially teenagers, don't want to only socialize with parents and siblings; they want to play with their peers. That's how they make sense of the world. And we've robbed them of that opportunity. We're raising our children in captivity and they turn to technology to socialize, learn and relax. Why are we blaming the screens?

美国和英国的研究一致表明，儿童已经失去了漫游的权利。这就是为什么我们的许多年轻人转向科技。他们不会对电脑上瘾；他们沉迷于互动，和朋友在一起。孩子们，尤其是青少年，不想只和父母和兄弟姐妹交往；他们想和同龄人一起玩。这就是他们感知世界的方式。而我们却剥夺了他们的机会。我们在囚禁中抚养我们的孩子，他们寻求科技来社交、学习和放松。我们为什么要责怪屏幕呢？

使用不会改写的写法，完整的第一段为：With the rapid advancement of society and technology, network addiction among children has become a common phenomenon in our daily lives. The author believes that we cannot blame the screens because children have lost the right to make sense of the world. I fully agree with the author's viewpoint.

随着社会的进步和科技的进步，儿童网络成瘾已经成为我们日常生活中的一个普遍现象。作者认为，我们不能责怪屏幕，因为孩子们已经失去了理解世界的权利。我完全同意作者的观点。

**注**：很明显，上一道样题我们必须同意作者的观点，这道样题我们同意、不同意、部分同意均可。

至此，文字作文第一段讲解完毕，第二、三段和图画图表作文相同。样题1 主题：围绕诚实、诚信、坦诚的重要性；样题 2：科技的利与弊。


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